Dove

[Jaychap]

Dove. White didn’t come out too well

[ben.catterall]

Was this your design? Or flash?
I have to say the line work doesn’t seem very good. Especially in the wing at the top right and in the branch in the doves mouth. Can see individual needle lines, not overall lining. And what happened with the tail? Seems muddy… Also, why blue? Not critical on that one just curious. I would have personally done light shading instead of blue… Or at least blended it a bit better. Sorry if that all sounded harsh. Just what I can see :)

[Jaychap]

I appreciate it. Added a couple of roses to it and my lines are getting good. This is before I cleaned it. The tail isn’t as muddy as it looks. It’s a little more healed now.

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