what did i do wrong?

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[attachment=0:3f57jfb0]untitledgfd.png[/attachment:3f57jfb0]Ok so I am self taught and practicing on myself. Here is my first attempt. I thought it went in pretty well.

[robroy289]

I’t looks to be pretty good from here. But I would like to see a picture i say 2 weeks.

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